On Wednesday I went to wall climbing with my Dad. The walls were incredibly high up. They were colossal. I climbed to the top of the wall. I felt awesome. I did a jack and the bean stalk one and came back saying, “I saw the giant”. It was a joyful, exciting day .
By Dylan
Some great words in this story. I particularly liked 'colossal' and 'incredibly'. It sounds like wall climbing was alot of fun.
ReplyDeleteWow, what an amazing adventure. I like the way you painted a picture in my mind of Jack climbing up the bean stalk. Well done Dylan. Mrs L
ReplyDeleteHow fun, scary and exciting! I would like to try wall climbing too. Great story Dylan
ReplyDeleteWhat a carefully crafted intelligent piece of work:) I love the use of language being produced at such a young age, keep up the awesome work Dylan, writing is a skill that always comes in handy:) X
DeleteAwesome story Dylan
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had a really fun day with your Dad
And you were so brave to climb all the way to the top
Did your Dad climb to the top too?
Sounds like a lot of fun! Climbing can be scary especially when it's quite high & you climbed to the top! Well done Dylan :)
ReplyDeleteGreat story Dylan.
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting adventure you had with your dad, you are so courageous.!
Jack & the beanstalk story was a neat way to explain your feelings of Rock climbing.
WOW,,,
Some excellent descriptive words there Dylan! Thankyou for sharing your rock climbing story with us. :)
ReplyDeleteWow what amazing story writing Dylan. I felt awesome imagining I was on the top of the climbing wall too. Simply brilliant, Thank you! Xo
ReplyDeleteGreat way you've told the story, Dylan. Well done! :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful, vivid picture you paint, Dylan! I really like the way you use the Jack and the Beanstalk image. You gave me goosebumps. I think I would have been too scared to climb that colossal wall with you.
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