WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Tuesday, November 18, 2014

HUG WOLF LAND


Once upon a time there was a boy with spiky
gold hair and blue eyes. He woke  up in a dark tunnel. He was afraid.
There was a note  saying “out there is wolves.  If they hug   you,  you will turn into one”.  But he wanted to go home.
He snuck past the wolfs and found clothes and a sword . So he  killed a wolf  and coved himself with  wolf fur, so he smells like a wolf. He went to the hospital and got a medicine that makes him invisible so he never got hugged again.

By Dylan.

Monday, November 17, 2014

WALT divide our writing into paragraphs


GREEN FIRE LANTERN GIRL

Once upon a time there lived a super  hero named green fire lantern girl. She lived in a big city. Her suit was green. She had a fire bracelet.
The problem was a robber was stealing super shiny gold,  diamonds and money. The robber was wearing a yellow beany.
She fought to get the stuff back. She kicked him in the nut’s and punched  him in the face and burst him in flames with her eye’s. Then the cop’s arrived to put the robber in jail. Now the town is safe thanks to Green Fire Lantern Girl.

By Harmony

Friday, November 14, 2014

BABY TALE ESCAPES


Once     a     upon      time   there was   a      baby      girl   called baby Tale.  She was      beautiful.  Her skin     felt     soft.  She looked     pretty    and cute.  She was nice and sounded beautiful.     She    liked     to    pull her mum’s     hair.     She     escaped     away     from     home and crawled all the way to McDonalds.   She went to look for food.   Her    mum     and    dad    woke    up    in   the    morning   and cried because she  had escaped.  They went to her favourite places to see if she was there and     found her eating chips at McDonalds.      Her     mum      and       dad       felt       happy and she wasn’t hungry anymore.

By     Briana.    

THUNDER


Once upon a time there was a little boy  called  Thunder. 

He  was  trying  to  swim  in  the big waves.  He started to drown  in  the  ocean.  The  problem  was  that  he  was  drowning  fast  as.  He  said,  “help, help”, but noone  heard  him.  Then  Thunder  started  to  go  up.  He  is  exhausted  and  tired.  He  thought  that  a  shark  was  going  to  eat  him. 
There  was  a  mum  and  the  dad  and  the  children  and  his  cousins.  They  were  all  walking  through  the  windy  beach and they heard Thunder calling, “help, help”. 
Then  they  saved  him.  The  dad  was  swimming  and  saved  Thunder.  He  said,  “hold  on  to  my  bag”.  Then the dad pulled  back  through  the  strong  waves and onto the sand. 
Thunder  was  freezing  cold  and  exhausted and tired. He  felt nervous. But  he  was happy  to be back home and lived happily ever after.
By Piukala
                       

SERITA IS HAVING A BABY

Serita was having a baby and she was at the sandy beach. It was a boiling hot night and she couldn’t sleep.  Her baby kept kicking her stomach.
The problem was that her family were in Samoa. She felt sad and all alone.  She also felt angry because her family went on vacation without her even though they the knew she was having a baby girl.
A witch came and flew her family to the beach.  She felt stupendously happy.  She said “thank you witch for bringing my beautiful, fantastic family back”. It was sunny and beautiful day and they named the baby Sofia. They lived happily ever after.
By Saini.                                                  

Tuesday, November 4, 2014

MY SNOWMAN

My snowman is friendly. My snowman likes to jump and dance. My snowman is white. My snowman is happy. My snowman likes singing a song. My snowman likes making  a snowman.

By Nga

SCIENCE SPELL

My  witch  loves  to  do  science   spells.  He  feels  mad.   He  is   black.   He   sounds  evil.   He’s   bad.  He  laughs an  evil  laugh.  He   make   dreams   come  true  and   he’s   good.  

By   Luisa .