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Friday, November 14, 2014

BABY TALE ESCAPES


Once     a     upon      time   there was   a      baby      girl   called baby Tale.  She was      beautiful.  Her skin     felt     soft.  She looked     pretty    and cute.  She was nice and sounded beautiful.     She    liked     to    pull her mum’s     hair.     She     escaped     away     from     home and crawled all the way to McDonalds.   She went to look for food.   Her    mum     and    dad    woke    up    in   the    morning   and cried because she  had escaped.  They went to her favourite places to see if she was there and     found her eating chips at McDonalds.      Her     mum      and       dad       felt       happy and she wasn’t hungry anymore.

By     Briana.    

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