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Friday, November 14, 2014

THUNDER


Once upon a time there was a little boy  called  Thunder. 

He  was  trying  to  swim  in  the big waves.  He started to drown  in  the  ocean.  The  problem  was  that  he  was  drowning  fast  as.  He  said,  “help, help”, but noone  heard  him.  Then  Thunder  started  to  go  up.  He  is  exhausted  and  tired.  He  thought  that  a  shark  was  going  to  eat  him. 
There  was  a  mum  and  the  dad  and  the  children  and  his  cousins.  They  were  all  walking  through  the  windy  beach and they heard Thunder calling, “help, help”. 
Then  they  saved  him.  The  dad  was  swimming  and  saved  Thunder.  He  said,  “hold  on  to  my  bag”.  Then the dad pulled  back  through  the  strong  waves and onto the sand. 
Thunder  was  freezing  cold  and  exhausted and tired. He  felt nervous. But  he  was happy  to be back home and lived happily ever after.
By Piukala
                       

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