WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Thursday, August 7, 2014

In the holidays I went to the movies. I had popcorn and a blue juice. By Davonte

2 comments:

  1. We like how you used your what, when and who in your writing. We liked how you described your juice. Next time you could tell us which movie did you watch?

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  2. like the way you describe the color of your drink along with what you ate..keep it up davonte never give up

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