WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Monday, August 25, 2014

MOTAT TRIP


The       electric     ball     was   cool    and it  made    me        happy.  Lucas’s  mum   took   us.  Thank   you   Lucas’s    mum.. The     purple lightening followed my      gorgeous   hand.  It    followed      my      thumb   when     it was  moving.

By Philemon.

1 comment:

  1. I like how you used your describing words Philemon. From Mrs L and Seira

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