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Friday, August 29, 2014

Motat Trip


Last    week     I     was    happy        to    go   to       motat.  It   was   fun    at   motat.   I   went    inside    the    reflecting    mirror       maze   and     I    got    lost.    But   I   found    the   way   out. Then    I     went   on   the    loud     choo    choo   train.    I    went    to    the    shaking     table.    I   felt    scared   because   I    felt   like    I  was   getting    thrown   off.     Then   we     went      on     the     bus     back    to    school.    Then     we    went     home.     I    had     an   amazing    day.

By Piukala
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2014 at 11:21 AM

    I like the way you put it in the order and you described the sound as choo choo by Psalms

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