WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Monday, August 25, 2014


On Wednsday room 1 went to motat. It looked amazing. I felt like I would want to stay there forever. I felt cheerful. Motat sounded like a low, low, low voice. But when we went inside it was loud.  It smelt like fresh air.  It was cool. I was with PsaIms mum, Louis. We went to the challenge zone.  I went on the shaking earthquake shop.  It was very wiggly.  I nearly fell off and died.  Then I went to the old phone house. It was a very awesome, exciting day.

By Seira

1 comment:

  1. Well done using capital letters and full stops. You told us what, where and when. I like how you called the earthquake shop 'wiggly'. By Philemon

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