On Wednsday
room 1 went to motat. It looked amazing. I felt like I would want to stay there
forever. I felt cheerful. Motat sounded like a low, low, low voice. But when we
went inside it was loud. It smelt like
fresh air. It was cool. I was with PsaIms
mum, Louis. We went to the challenge zone.
I went on the shaking earthquake shop.
It was very wiggly. I nearly fell
off and died. Then I went to the old
phone house. It was a very awesome, exciting day.
By Seira
Well done using capital letters and full stops. You told us what, where and when. I like how you called the earthquake shop 'wiggly'. By Philemon
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