On Wednesday
me and my class went to Motat. It was
beautiful. We all got in our groups and
went to the cars. My mum grabbed a piece
of paper. We had to find different kinds
of cars. We found cars with pieces of
material and ones with shiny roofs. We
had a race winding the window down. If
you pressed a button the window went down or you wound the window down with
your hands. Which was faster? Winding the window down with your hands was
faster. It was an exciting day. I liked finding the cars.
By Dylan
Good story Dylan. I remember when all car windows had to be wound up and down by hand. I like cars too.
ReplyDeleteGoing to MOTAT is always fun. You were lucky to have your Mum go on the trip too. Your story makes me want to go to MOTAT again and see what new things they have there now.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your story Dylan. I especially liked your description of the window winding race. We sure had fun that day at MOTAT didn't we? Mum
ReplyDeleteMotat's great. I like the way you've put this story together and included all the exciting bits. Well done, Dylan.
ReplyDeleteThat's surprising Dylan. I would think pressing the button would make the window go down faster. Sounds like you had great fun. Makes me want to go to Motat :-)
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Aunty Jag
I love that you said it was beautiful Dylan. You're a fabulous writer! x
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