Great piece of writing Hudsyn! Like how you've used descriptive words to help portray your message. Continue to do your best and help others to do the same. Mum xo
She sounds lovely Hudsyn. What made her patient? I wonder if it's because she has taken time to share her beautiful with her friends? Every time I hear someone with a sofT and gentle voice now, I will think of the Hudsyn Mermaid. Well Done! You are a very talented writer. ^UncleBen
A voice as soft as a pillow, what a wonderful description Hudsyn. Next time could could add more detail about what made her beautiful.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing Hudsyn! Like how you've used descriptive words to help portray your message. Continue to do your best and help others to do the same. Mum xo
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful description of your mermaid Hudsyn, your story was lovely to read. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Well done!
ReplyDeleteShe sounds lovely Hudsyn. What made her patient? I wonder if it's because she has taken time to share her beautiful with her friends? Every time I hear someone with a sofT and gentle voice now, I will think of the Hudsyn Mermaid. Well Done! You are a very talented writer. ^UncleBen
ReplyDeleteNicely written Hudsyn! I like the words you have used. Your writing made me smile :)
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Well done Hudsyn! Very cool descriptive wording.
ReplyDeleteI love the sound of your mermaid Hudsyn! There's a great use of adjectives in these sentences. Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of words Hudsyn. Well done!!!, can't wait to see more.
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