I am learning to add more detail to make my writing more interesting

Room1 had a problem it was so much noise and we couldn’t learn so we made earmuffs. We used tissue, cardboard, beads and a cup to learn about blocking sound. That all the things we used. I learnt that tissue doesn’t block the sound properly. We tried cardboard and it doesnt work. Then we used foam, it didn’t work. Then we  tried rubber, it worked. That was the least loudest. We made ear muffs to block the sound so we can learn. We used foam and rubber. The colour of the rubber was yellow. We did a plan so we can copy it when we made our earmuffs. We had to plan what we where going to make. I made earmuffs. I made it out of a headband, a wet suit, foam, rubber, loombands, two beads and sparkles to decorate. That’s all the things I used on my earmuffs. I love my earmuffs.  They help me learn.

By Nevaeh