WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Friday, September 5, 2014

I am learning to use describing words in my writing.


The     problem     was        there     was    too much      noise     in       the     class.       We     learnt       about      sound.      We  put     beads  in   an     cup      and      put       different    material           like    foam and rubber and tissue and cardboard.         The loudest was tissue, the second loudest was cardboard, the third loudest was foam and the quietest was rubber.  Then       we     planned             what   we    were       going       to       make      so         we        couldn’t       hear          heaps                    of     noise.  I made ear muffs with foam, rubber and cardboard.        I      made     a    circle     with      cardboard.        l       put         some             foam      on       the       cardboard.       l    cut some rubber into a square and put it on the foam.  Then I put some wool on the rubber.      Then      it       was      finished       and         l     wear   it     so       l       don’t     get      interrupted.
By Lukas

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lukas, your story sounds like you had a fun time learning about sound, you have a lot of spaces in your story, maybe next time have a look at your work and see if it looks like the others. I enjoyed reading your story

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