WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Friday, September 5, 2014

I AM LEARNING TO USE DESCRIBING WORDS IN MY WRITING


Room 1     was     doing    an     experiment       because      the       people   was      trying     their      best     to      solve      their     problem.   Why     because      everyone      was     so    noisy      and   the      sound    waves     were     really    loud   and     interrupting       our     learning.    We    learnt   how    to     make    earmuffs      because    everybody      wants    to    do    their     learning.    I   felt     glad.    We    made      it on   Friday      and      my      earmuffs     was    so       awesome       and      they       blocked      the      sound.

By Simeon
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2014 at 11:33 AM

    Well done using 'because' to write a compound sentence. Next time use more WOW words. By Tanu

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