WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Thursday, September 4, 2014


Lollipop, the old, old car.

Lollipop, the old car went to the race with two little blue cars, a big green car and a red racing car.

Lollipop, the old car went to the race. Away they went.

Lollipop the old, old car went to the beautiful race and versed two little blue cars, a big green car and a red racing car. They had a race. Lollipop, the old car won the race to Hilltop Park.
By Davonte

1 comment:

  1. Davonte, I love the way you did this writing at home.
    From Mrs. White

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