WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Thursday, September 4, 2014

The Park


We went to the park up by the mountain. I got on the swing. I pushed myself and I went high. I didn’t cry.
There was no slide.
We went on the round thing. My cousin pushed me. It went fast. If you fall off, you hurt yourself and you need a plaster.
Ngatamaine

1 comment:

  1. Nga.I'm proud of your writing today.
    From Mrs. White

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