Last week I was watching UFC on TV by myself. I felt nervous. When Jake Shield did the uppercut it knocked Meriwether out cold. Jake Shield’s fist was as strong as iron and faster than lightning. Maywether had a massive gash of blood bolting down Maywether’s eye. I felt shocked. By Psalms
What an exciting fight! I loved the '...fist as strong as iron and faster than lightning' sentance, what a wonderful description.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Psalms. I like the way you told us how it made you feel. Mrs L
ReplyDeleteI'm very proud to see your writing is improving and to read what you actually try to practice
ReplyDeleteon your Dad is really cool. Mum