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Monday, August 4, 2014

Going to Rainbows End

I went to Rainbows End. I came with my cousin and aunty. l was very excited. I went on the invader. When I went to the edge it looked like I was going to spin off. I felt scared. I also went on the log fume, goldrush and family cars and bumper cars with William and bumper boats. Those rides were awesome. Then we had a icecream. Then we went home. The icecream was yummy. By Lukas
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  1. Mrs LAugust 4, 2014 at 8:16 PM

    It sounds like you had a fun time at Rainbows End. I would have felt scared on the invader as well. Next time you could use WOW words to describe the other rides.

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  2. UnknownAugust 6, 2014 at 6:11 AM

    Hi Lukas, what a nice story, I'm glad you had fun with your family at rainbows end. I wonder what your going to blog next time.

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