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Tuesday, August 12, 2014

The Beautiful Mermaid


The   mermaid     feels      sad.     The      mermaid        feels     happy      because    she    married      the    man.    She  has     sparkling     eyes.      By Philemon
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  1. Mrs LAugust 12, 2014 at 9:10 PM

    I like how you described your mermaid's eyes as sparkling. Next time you could use more describing words to tell us how she looked.

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