A mermaid
looks like half human and half fish. She smells like salty sea water. She acts
like a fish swimming fast. She feels in her heart that she loves a strong brave
talented boy. By Harmony
Well done describing how the mermaid loved the boy. Well done using WOW words. Next time you could tell us what does the mermaid's tail look like From Room1
What a great description of the strong, brave, talented boy. Next time you could add more detail about what your mermaid looks like.
ReplyDeleteAwesome Description of the Mermaid Harmony, I can almost smell the salty seawater.
ReplyDeleteBrenda Sciascia
What a beautiful story Harmony. Your mermaid sounds very pretty and she sounds like she has a good heart. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful story Harmony! Your mermaid sounds like she is very pretty and has a strong heart. Well Done!
ReplyDeleteFrom Mel and Rocco
Well done describing how the mermaid loved the boy. Well done using WOW words. Next time you could tell us what does the mermaid's tail look like From Room1
ReplyDeleteI love how you described how the Mermaid feels for the boy. She must have a beautiful heart just like you. Well done my baby.
ReplyDeleteLove Mum
Terri :)