WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Thursday, August 14, 2014

The Man and The Train


The  fast train had some soft seats in it.  It had some hooks outside and some lines. Inside it had an old man. The  man  was  turning  the  rope  around. By Hana
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  1. Mrs LAugust 15, 2014 at 12:00 PM

    Well done using describing words in your writing. Well done using capital letters. From Room1

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  2. Room1November 4, 2014 at 1:28 PM

    her one is pretty. and friendly by Nga

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