The tram
was fun. The
tram have lots
of seats. I
had a
ride on the
tram. It sounded
louder and louder
and louder. It
is scary. It
runs on electricity. The
man gave room
one a short
ride. It feel
exciting.
By Krish
Krish I really enjoyed reading your work. Good use of words and easy to understand. It is interesting to learn more about tram. To improve your writing it would be good to mention about the trip to Motat with your class and connecting it with tram.
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