WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Monday, August 25, 2014


Yesterday room one went to motat. My group was my mum and Krish and Philemon and Patrick .  I liked the ball.  You touch and zap people.  It was awesome.  The glass that makes   two peoples  faces merge together was awesome.  We went on the tram. The tram was pleasent   and peaceful. When we had lunch mine was scrumptious. I liked to look at the difference of the new things and the old things and the mirror maze. I banged myself twice.

By Lucas     

2 comments:

  1. It was a fun day lucas and I very much enjoyed spending time with you and our group
    Love Mum

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  2. I liked your writing because it described what you did in the mirror maze. We also liked how you used WOW words. Next time you could use 'because' in a compund sentence. From Room1

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