WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Friday, September 5, 2014

I AM LEARNING TO USE CAPITAL LETTER AND FULL STOPS


I am telling how Room 1 stopped too much noise.  The noise was going in your ears and we want to stop the noise going in your ears.  We are learning about the noise. 

We was learning that the foam and rubber was the best to block the noise so the noise won’t go in your ears.  We used the foam and the rubber to make our ear muffs for your ears so the noise won’t go in your ears. 

My  ear  muffs    are   pink and they have got some loom bands.  They are light and they have some pink pompoms.

By Hana

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Hana. What a great explanation. You have written seven sentences and included describing words.

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