A MOMENT IN TIME

Room 1 has been learning how to describe a Moment in Time. 

TWO BOYS RACING

Yellow sun rays are sparkling on the humungous dusty road. Giant green trees are sparkling, glittering, shaking  next to the road. The spooky shadow lying on the black, dusty, sandy, rocky road.  Excited boys racing down the rocky hill.  Bumpety bump, crash, crash zooming down the mountain. “Fast, fast, faster to the bottom of the hill”.  Wind blowing the dust in their face  Trolley wheels shaking, hair blowing backwards.  What an amazing race?

By Nga, Keleiola, Krish, Philemon, Davonte, O’shanessy, Luisa.

They are peeking to see down the bumpy road.  The trees are blocking the sun.  They are rolling down the hill.

By Maia Rose

Stupendous boys are racing down the rocky road. Dark green trees are in the scary woods.  Winds are blowing the tall trees.  The excited boys think that are racing down the track.  Dirt blows on their skin.

By Danica

Riding down the rocky road superfast. Wooooshing down the hill with their trolley. Speeding superfast. Feeling stupendous riding on their trolley. Bumpety bump on the tiny rocks, zooming down the mountain. Feeling the dust on their skin. Shining sun sparkling in the lovely sky. Shadows cover the dusty road. The problem was they didn’t have a helmet.

By Seira.

Dusty messy road looks like a sandpit .   Fantastic   boys zoom down the dusty road.  Fantastic  boys get the butterflies.  Fantastic boys zoom down the road.  They feel the dust sticking on their skin.   The wooshing wind blows the dust off.  Minuscule birds tweet.  They  are stunned by all the fun they are having.

By Dylan.

A  sun  is  orange.  They  are  starting  to  ride  down  the  sandy hill.  Sand  is  going  to  stick  on  to  the  two  excited   boys.  Two  excited    boys  are  skating  on  their  boards.  Two  excited  boys  were  in  the  middle  of  a  forest.  Two  exciting  boys  were   in  a  middle  of  darkness. Two  excited  boys  screaming  down  a  hill.

By Piukala
 

TWO BOYS SKATING

Bumpety bump down the rocky road. Yellow sun shining in the indian boys’ eyes. Skating down the dusty  road, feeling nervous. Dust is going on there skin.

By Harmony

Dark shadows covering the two boys.  Racing down the humungous super rocky road. Bumpety bump, racing over the mud holes. Bumpety bump racing down the sandy road.  Shaking nervously as they zoom down a steep hill.

By Lukas