Eddie said
to Nina, “My Mum doesn’t like Pickles going inside the house.”
It was too
late. Pickles did go inside. Pickles’ dirty feet went on the chair and the
curtain and the bed. Pickles did a mess. Eddie’s mum saw the mess and they had
to clean the house. Finally they caught Pickles. Eddie told his mum the whole
thing.
Davonte
Excellent story writing Son, keep up the awesome work, love the way you are always determine to complete your story and the way you word it too.
ReplyDeletegreat work son we are so proud of you, love always mummy and daddy.