WE ARE LEARNING TO: use WOW words in our writing.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

The Story of Meeting Pickles

When it was the morning, Nina and her friend named Eddie played with Pickles. Then pickles ran away from Eddie and Nina. They started to run after Pickles.

Eddie said to Nina, “My Mum doesn’t like Pickles going inside the house.”

It was too late. Pickles did go inside. Pickles’ dirty feet went on the chair and the curtain and the bed. Pickles did a mess. Eddie’s mum saw the mess and they had to clean the house. Finally they caught Pickles. Eddie told his mum the whole thing.

Davonte

1 comment:

  1. Excellent story writing Son, keep up the awesome work, love the way you are always determine to complete your story and the way you word it too.
    great work son we are so proud of you, love always mummy and daddy.

    ReplyDelete