I went to the house of magic movie with mum. It was funny because the dog was pink. I was super exited of the funny looking rabbit with a broken old broom stick. The popcorn was yum and warm. My favourite part was when the cat went to a house. I cheered then we went home.
By Patrick
Oh I like cats, and dogs and popcorn and rabbits with broomsticks
ReplyDeleteA pink dog and a funny looking rabbit, it sounds like an amusing movie. Well done using describing words Patrick. Next time you could tell us why you were excited about the cat going to the house.
ReplyDeleteI liked the Wow words you used Patrick. They made your story interesting to read. I am wondering about the funny looking rabbit with the broomstick. Next time, maybe you could say why he was funny looking and what he did with the broomstick.
ReplyDeleteI liked the WOW words you used Patrick. They made your story interesting to read. Next time you could tell us why you were super excited about the funny looking rabbit.
ReplyDeleteI think eating popcorn is one of our favourites things that we like to do when watching a movie. I like your story very much and the way you talked about different things in the movie. I would like to hear more about the rabbit and what he did with his broken old broom stick! Mum
ReplyDeleteI saw that movie too, did you see the part when the guys face blew up all red because of his cat allergy?
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